MEET YOUR STORY MEDICS

A.D.

Expert in high-stakes plotting, intricate strategy, and authentic action—police, federal agents, military worlds. If your story needs tight tension, smart twists, or realistic procedural beats, AD's your go-to for making it all click without losing heart.

"A great plot is like a well-executed operation. Precise, purposeful, and life-changing."

Master of snappy, authentic dialogue and emotional depth. She excels at making difficult characters likable, layering heroes and villains with real humanity, and building intricate emotional conflicts that pull readers in and keep them hooked.

"Every story has a heartbeat. I help you find it and make it pulse through your pages."

jMack

Cap'n Garrett

The big-picture navigator who keeps your story's throughline strong and momentum flowing. He gently nudges you to take bold risks, crank up the stakes, and ensure every scene drives the narrative forward—always with encouragement and zero judgment.

"Your storyworld should feel so real, readers forget they're reading fiction."

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STORY MEDICS IN ACTION

Every Tuesday at 4:00PM MST

PULSE CHECK

CHOOSE YOUR TRIAGE LEVEL

Join a supportive, live collaborative session with an experienced writers who'll gently assess your work in real time. In a nurturing, no-pressure space, we'll guide you through the writing process with kind, tailored feedback, fresh insights, and easy hands-on techniques.

You'll sharpen your craft, deepen your storytelling skills, reignite your passion, help your unique voice shine, and walk away with lasting confidence-boosting tools—all in an energizing, collaborative vibe that feels like a friendly check-up for your creative heart.

Is your story feeling a bit flat?Need a quick heartbeat check?

RESUSCITATION

We'll dive into your work live and in real time with 1–3 experienced writers acting as your personal story paramedics. In this supportive, collaborative, and energizing session, you'll get personalized feedback, practical insights, and hands-on coaching to strengthen your craft, spark new ideas, overcome blocks, and revive your writerly confidence

Whether you're building skills from the ground up, deepening your storytelling abilities, or simply needing a nurturing boost to let your unique voice shine—this no-judgment resuscitation session delivers the tools to get your story breathing strong again.

Does your story need oxygen? Firm, steady compressions to pump your story forward.

DE-FIB

For manuscripts that feel beyond hope, Story De-Fib is a high-energy shock revival – for "flatlined" stories. This intensive high-energy, live session occurs with your choice of 1–3 seasoned writers delivering in-depth critique and strategic shocks of insight.

We'll go full defibrillation mode: real-time guidance, razor-sharp tailored feedback, advanced techniques to elevate your work from good to gripping, while building unbreakable confidence through collaborative energy and proven confidence-boosting tools.

In this supportive yet intense space, reignite your passion, sharpen advanced skills, and watch your unique voice thunder back to life—no story is too far gone.

Story completely flatlined? Time for the paddles—clear!

OUR MISSION:

At Story CPR, we step in as your dedicated collaborator to help struggling manuscripts thrive — breathing fresh life into every page, chapter, and dream through expert editing, thoughtful coaching, and precise manuscript resuscitation.

We provide the serious, craft-level feedback and elevation your dedication to writing deserves, empowering authors at any stage — from first drafts to long-struggling works — to transform challenging stories into polished, compelling narratives that pulse with vitality, connect deeply with readers, and find their lasting place in the world.

STORY CPR FEEDBACK

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DAVID

I was having a hard time getting started. I spent my days world building, but just not getting words on paper. These guys helped me focus on what was most important...and then it was off to the races.

Every step of the way--I finally had a team that cared about the book inside me as much as I did. I'm so glad I chose them instead of another writing seminar!

MONICA

Sometimes you just need a coach that can cut through the muddle and help you attack what issues are stopping your story.

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